Improve wording (#2118)

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             FIRE grants individuals a higher level of autonomy and empowerment
             over their schedules and the activities they choose to pursue.
             Whether it involves exploring new career paths, starting a business,
-            or embarking on extensive travel, FIRE provides the flexibility to
+            or undertaking adventurous travels, FIRE provides the flexibility to
             determine how time is spent and how life is shaped.
           </p>
         </section>
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@
             understanding of the advantages and disadvantages.
           </p>
           <p>
-            Knowing your financial situation and tracking it diligently is vital
-            on your journey to FIRE. This is where the power of
+            Knowing your financial situation and consistently monitoring it is
+            vital on your journey to FIRE. This is where the strength of
             <a href="https://ghostfol.io">Ghostfolio</a>, a comprehensive open
             source wealth management software, comes into play. By leveraging
             Ghostfolio, you can gain deep insights into your financial health,